• Large Scale Level Design
• Some Few Astonishing Places
• Explosive Chain Reaction [Map 2]
• Good Finale Concept [especially the Catwalk Corridor]
• Custom Soundtrack at the Bar

• Feels Bare, Boring and Repetitive
• Poor Quality Textures
• Desk Counter Bug [Map 2; Shoved then got Incapped]
• Bug in Map 2 [See Cracks through the Map in one Area]
• Car Bug [Map 3; Moves all of a sudden and Incapped]
• Confusing Layout Throughout
• Fairly Annoying
• Bad Bot Nav
• Bug in Map 5 [Bus Moves all of a sudden]
• Respawn Closet Glitch [Map 5; Fell through the Map]

Fun campaign that seems to bit a buggy and feels raw.

good length.
Very open campaign which is unique.
Very Detailed.
Saferoom not so safe lol.

At times not sure where to go.
Some slowdown issues on some levels.
Very underrated unfortunately.

A very good campaign that has a lot going for it, I enjoyed most of it. just some slowdown provlems and not much more. Its sad that this is so underrated and feels like a crime. But anyway well done and a pat on the back from me. :)

good length.
Very open campaign which is unique.
Very Detailed.
Saferoom not so safe lol.

At times not sure where to go.
Some slowdown issues on some levels.
Very underrated unfortunately.

A very good campaign that has a lot going for it, I enjoyed most of it. just some slowdown provlems and not much more. Its sad that this is so underrated and feels like a crime. But anyway well done and a pat on the back from me. :)

- Story
- Bot navigation is okay
- Idea for unsafe saferoom
- Plenty of places to explore
- Stayed true to the title
- Alarm cars
- Graffiti in the underground parking lot
- Letter to Ellis in the beginning although it's hard to read
- Design
- Custom music
- Environment
- Elevator in map 1

- Some cars have bad resolution
- Needs a few more direction arrows added in some places
- Map size (370mb once opened) although it's understandable due to it's originality)
- Map 1-3 were a bit short
- So many pointless rooms and dead ends, especially in the finale
- When we move the jukebox howcome it starts playing? Also no loading bar
- No dialogue?

Very underrated! Obviously a lot of effort has gone into this campaign, it's just hard for people like me who lag in some campaigns due to it's size. There are plenty of creative ideas in this, it's just sad they go unnoticed. Overall, it's a decent campaign so well done!

======= In general =======
+ A lot of improvements.
+ Campaigns setting based on real life areas.
+ Fluent gameplay.
+ Acceptable difficulty.
+ Quite an eye for designing maps.
+ Very nice surroundings.
+ Finale overpass design was freakin' awesome!
+ Finale caused no problems and ended very well.
+ Long 5 maps campaign.
+ AI navigation was acceptable, but see Cons.

======= Map 1 =======
- AI mates were spawning down the ladder instead of climbing it down.
- Cars were blocking enemies, near the safe room.
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======= Map 2 =======
- AI mates didn't get onto that lift next tot the store.
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======= Map 4 =======
- Choppy feeling and not optimized framerate.
- Zombies were able to get into the saferoom because of the big windows there.
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======= Misc =======
- AI navigation problems in some areas.
- Design: look down to 'Conclusion'.
- More hints please.
- Low res. cars on the highway.
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Design: first of all it is quite amazing how detailed you "expressed" your area/neighbourhood, but there are some things that have to be mentioned as well that are not so good. No matter if the map is copied from a real area, things like grass HAVE to be added. Most of the time we were walking on grass-textures without a single culm. The areas were also a bit to0 empty for a rural village or city. The woods and the creek were very nice for some time, but there are too many of the same trees, try to add some varied things to the environments!
But summarizingly you have made noticable progress on this campaign. Take care of the few Cons, especially some environmental design and AI NAV and the campaign is going to be close to perfect.
8/10 seem legit for now, changed if campaign gets updated.
Update #1: the lift was located on map 2, not map1, sorry.

Nice finale.
The custom song fits the apocalypse, otherwise the music makes sense if it is the last CD or something before the owners died from the flu.
North America.

major lag on map 4.

The only problem I got was the lag from this campaign on map 4 from facing the powerlines. I had to quit and skip the map to the finale map.

+ Decent length
+ Apparently pretty faithful to the actual locations?
+ Custom music was fitting

- Where are all the zombies?
- Way too many tanks
- Seriously, where are all the zombies? You know this is Left 4 Dead, right?
- Unsafe safe room in chapter four. I know this was intentional, but what's the point? It's completely defeating the purpose of a SAFE room.
- On that same topic, if you don't close the safe room door, you can break through the window and continue on to nothing. Maybe fence it off initially? Or, you know, get rid of the giant, wall-sized window? I mean, think about it: Why bother putting safe room doors on a house that isn't safe to begin with?
- The custom music was abnormally loud.
- Too many empty halls, empty streets, empty buildings
- Low-res cars on the highway. It felt like a PS1 game.

The map isn't all bad, really. It could use some work, but it's not god-awful or anywhere near the worst map I've ever played.
If I had to single out my biggest complaints, I'd say there's too few zombies (seriously), too many tanks, and the map is way too empty most of the time. It gets really boring. And because of that, the progression of each chapter went like this:
Exit safe room > kill a zombie or two > TANK > recover from ta-- > TANK > reco-- > TANK > limp to safe room
I believe you have the potential to make a good map and that this one was more to show off how true-to-life you could make it look than to be a fun, creative map.

-It was... Unique?
-The purple light in the second room was cool...

-Horrible Detail throughout the entire campaign, along with terrible level designs. Pokemon yellow has better visuals than this... It is so unfinished in pretty much every possible area I really don't have the time to type it all.
-The maps are way to wide open! Left 4 Dead 2 is not Grand Theft Auto! It should not have the ability to "Free-Roam!".
-Barely any directions as to where your going at all. This combined with extremely wide opened maps just leads to you walking aimlessly around for ten or more minutes just until you find a clue as to where your going!
-No ambient sounds at all! and no survivor dialogue! It's like running around with no volume!
-Hardly any infected... In fact the overused amount of alarm cars is probably a good thing, as they are the only way you can get a reasonable amount of infected per map.
-Absolutely horrid to bots navigation. Bots have no idea what to do on this campaign at all.
-Most of the doors open up in the complete wrong direction. Doors at the finale that clearly say "push" on them will be pulled...
-The safe rooms do not appear to be "Safe" at all
-No sense of realism what so ever
-Frame rate dropped in finale a significant amount
-Because of the poor level design the map flows and transitions terribly

This campaign is more or less, just one big Hide-and-seek game with the safe rooms. All it involves is you running around overly sized and spacious areas with an incredible lack of detail, searching for some hint as to where the safe room is while maybe a grand total of 50 infected are lurking in the ENTIRE map. It's quite obvious where this is going...

NOT RECOMMENDED!

Railway station finale.

Karaoke bar.

Hotel looked like blank canvas. Assuming it was a hotel.

WAY too big. The maps are enormous and filled with dead ends and forks. The only way to know if there's a boundary is to hit invisible walls.

Poor look. Ugly in some spots, mostly wooded areas. The items on the floor look pasted on.

Lack of decor. Aside from cheesy graffiti and a few (very few) store signs, there's not much to look at.

Bots. Terrible. NAV is awful. They don't follow, they don't teleport, they don't shoot much and they don't stay in safe rooms. The only time they showed some initiative is when the copter showed up. They got there before I did.

Senseless level designs. Nothing looks natural or realistic. The paths are clumsy and there a just a handful of arrows for direction.

Way too many alarmed cars.

Saferooms are open areas. The saferoom on map 4 had a broken window where infected came in but when map 5 started the window was put back.

Very easy. This is basically a cardio campaign. Just run in one direction to the saferoom for each map. That's if you know where to go.

Too few weapons and incendiaries.

No custom dialogue.

Tanks stumble on cars and walls. On map 5, the tank humped the back of a bus for a whole minute until I killed it.

It looks bland, is easy, unoriginal and is very poorly mapped out. It's boring and annoying.

To the author: Much like your other work "Dark Tower", you need to realize that less is more.

Cut down the openness of your maps. You don't need miles of nothing: it's just time wasted when you go around in circles. Add decor, depth and optimize everything. Make the paths shorter and create areas that cause conflict and excitement like your bar area and the railway.